RE: Student Film
From: Tom S (spyderdawg@hotmail.com)
Sent: 29 April 2009 12:39:34
To: rorym31@hotmail.com
Hey Rory,
Thanks for asking my opinion. Your idea sounds like a good one. If its not too much trouble, pehaps you can shoot both and use the one that comes out best. Otherwise, I have no problem going with your idea, it conveys the same message, and that is my concern.
Thanks
Tom Smolko
216-965-9089
www.smokescreen.weebly.com
From: rorym31@hotmail.com
To: spyderdawg@hotmail.com
Subject: RE: Student Film
Date: Wed, 29 Apr 2009 10:40:03 +0000
Hey Tom,
We have been planning the shoot and after much discussion feel that the narrative would be more effective if the AIDs victim was narrating it himself. We feel that if the narration was more personal to the character it would help the audience sympathize with the character himself.
For example,
male (V.o.)
Everyday, 6000 Africans die of A.I.D.S. 6000 libraries are burned to the ground.
Instead we feel,
male (V.O.)
They told me everyday 6000 Africans die of A.I.D.S.. That must mean 6000 libraries are burned to the ground.
How would you feel about changes such as these?
We can shoot it both ways but we felt that it would be the best thing to contact you first and get some input from you as we are not screenwriters ourselves.
Many thanks,
Rory Martinez
From: spyderdawg@hotmail.com
To: rorym31@hotmail.com
Subject: RE: Student Film
Date: Thu, 16 Apr 2009 05:43:52 -0400
Hey Rory,
Excellent, yes, you can use the script. The only thing I ask is that you send me a copy of the final product and you give me writing credit in the film as follows:
A Smoke Screen Entertainment, LLC Screenplay
Written by: Tom Smolko
Good luck and I look forward to seeing the short,
Thanks,
Tom Smolko
216-965-9089
www.smokescreen.weebly.com
From: rorym31@hotmail.com
To: spyderdawg@hotmail.com
Subject: RE: Student Film
Date: Wed, 15 Apr 2009 22:23:35 +0000
Hey Tom,
We have been talking through the script and it seems excellent, we think that we would be able to produce a really powerful piece. If it is ok with you we would love to use this script.
Thanks,
Rory Martinez
From: spyderdawg@hotmail.com
To: rorym31@hotmail.com
Subject: RE: Student Film
Date: Wed, 15 Apr 2009 12:39:45 -0400
Hey Rory,
I actually do have one script like that. It's a very strong piece about AIDS, and the bonus with this script is that I've written a feature film called The Grave Digger that is about AIDS in Africa and if the AIDS short is well done, I might be able to get it played in theaters before the feature. The feature is fully packaged and close to being funded. Let me know if this is up your alley.
thanks,
Tom Smolko
216-965-9089
www.smokescreen.weebly.com
From: rorym31@hotmail.com
To: spyderdawg@hotmail.com
Subject: RE: Student Film
Date: Wed, 15 Apr 2009 16:25:02 +0000
Hey Tom,
Thanks for sending all of the scripts. We have been looking through them and at the moment we are leaning towards the Taxi comedy but we were wondering if you have any fully narrated stories with no character dialog that we could have a look at.
Thanks,
Rory Martinez
From: spyderdawg@hotmail.com
To: rorym31@hotmail.com
Subject: RE: Student Film
Date: Wed, 15 Apr 2009 11:28:29 -0400
Hi Rory,
I've attached an assortment of scripts for you.
Cheater, The Drifter, Black Out and Free Spirit are all suspense/thriller, 6th sense-type scripts.
Carjacker is a dark comedy
The Other side is a drama
Taxi is a comedy
Let me know if you'd like to use any of them,
Thanks,
Tom Smolko
216-965-9089
www.smokescreen.weebly.com
From: rorym31@hotmail.com
To: spyderdawg@hotmail.com
Subject: RE: Student Film
Date: Wed, 15 Apr 2009 14:38:47 +0000
Hey Tom,
As of yet we are open to all genres but something like you said that has a good twist or emotional story-line. We are thinking along the lines of a 5-20 minute long production which has minimal locations and characters. We have no budget but we have access to a wide range of production equipment.
Would be great if you could send multiple option from which to have a look at.
Many thanks,
Rory Martinez
From: spyderdawg@hotmail.com
To: rorym31@hotmail.com
Subject: RE: Student Film
Date: Wed, 15 Apr 2009 08:42:09 -0400
Hey Rory,
You've come to the right place. I have a lot of short films available. What length and genres interest you? All of my films are low/no budget and won't take much to produce, but have good twists. Let me know what your interested in and I'll send you what I have.
Thanks,
Tom Smolko
216-965-9089
www.smokescreen.weebly.com
From: rorym31@hotmail.com
To: tsmoke11@gmail.com
Subject: Student Film
Date: Wed, 15 Apr 2009 12:37:34 +0000
Dear Tom,
I am a student at Leeds College of Art and Design in my second year of studying BA Design for Digital Media. Myself and a colleague have been asked to produce a short film for our end of year show and as we are not screenwriters have been told to try and source a short script. I have been searching around and came across your post on the NewEnglandFilm.com website and were wondering if you have any short scripts that are available that we could possibly produce.
Kind regards
Rory